Tuesday, August 2, 2011

Skill post1

I think that everyone would think that learning English in abroad with fun activities is the best way for learning
English. If it includes good, experienced teachers, it'd be very good. There are two camps that contains going  abroad and fun activities. One is Ranch West Camp and the other is Head Start Splash. I am going to compare and contrast these two camps. Think about what camp will be better to go.

 Ranch West Camp is in Canada and it conains natural activities such as Horseback Riding, River rafting, and so on. However, don't  you think these activities can be dangerous? Kids can fall down of the horse or drown. Also, the teachers are not experienced teachers. They are students who recently graduated college. Because if their lack of experience, children can't get enough safety services. As you know, teachers with a lot of xperiences knows  what to do in emergency. Do you think you can do something with having some lectures? No! You have to do it several times to know what to do.

Now, let me introduce you the Head Start Splash Camp. This is a camp in the Philippines. Actually, it is in an island, close to the beach. This camp contains natural activities such as fishing, trip to a local butterfly garden, and so on. This is a four week camp, and it is 1 week longer than the Ranch West Camp in Canda.
Well, back to the activities. The activities are all safe. Nobody gets hurt by butterflies. The teachers here are all local teachers with bachelor's degree. They have more experiences and they are more learned.

Now, what camp would you like to choose? I would choose the Head Start Splash Camp. First, for the safety, and second, for the learned teachers. Going abroad and fun activities don't count because Camp Ranch West has those too. English, not to mention, is used in both camps.But still, Head Start Splash has more benefits. 

1 comment:

  1. Nice, but where are the transition words we talked about? If I read the second and third paragraphs without the introduction and conclusion it is not clear that you are comparing anything. You are just given your opinion about two different things. The transition words help to link your ideas; use them.

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